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    Welcome to the first installment of the Super Series! This will be a series of stories involving superheroes who are "caught short" while in the midst of saving the world. Nothing's hotter than a curvaceous, spandex clad heroine with a solid lump in the rear of her uni! All the heroes will be ones I've created who are analogues (i.e. generic knock-offs) of popular super-heroes.

    First up is Thunder Woman. She is based on the DC Comics' character Mary Marvel, a teen girl who speaks a magic word (SHAZAM) and transforms into an adult heroine along with her brother Captain Marvel and their friend Captain Marvel JR. The three of them are known as The Marvel Family. You can read more about her here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Marvel There are links to the other Marvel Family characters in that article. Mary Marvel, Captain Marvel, Captain Marvel Jr, and the Marvel Family are copyright 2012 DC Comics, Inc. and I make no claims of ownership, nor do they appear in this story.

    Thunder Woman, Thunder Man, Kid Thunder, and all other characters are copyright 2012 Narada Jagganath Enterprises. This story contains: lesbianism, bondage, S&M, panty pooping, panty pissing, and scat. All characters involved in sexual activity are of legal, consensual age.

    P.S. If this story seems familiar, I first posted it on the old board in 2010.

    Super Series 1: Thunder Woman Bound
    By
    Sri Narada Jagganath, Esq.

    Synopsis: After years of meditation, a Hindi holy man discovered a magic word that could give an average human the power of a god--THUNSTOFAM!(an abbreviation for THe UNited STates OF AMerica). He gave the word to two teens, Jamar Jameson and Katie Carstairs, who became the heroes Thunder Man and Thunder Woman! The two heroes then shared their powers with Katie's kid brother Kenny, who became Kid Thunder! Now, the three teens protect their hometown of Beckston, IL and the world from evil as THE THUNDER FAMILY!


    "Hey sis, freakshow's checkin' you out again."

    Katie Carstairs sighed theatrically and rolled her eyes. She was having lunch in Fawcett High's cafeteria with her brother Kenny and her boyfriend Jamar Jameson. She shot a murderous glance at the black clad bespectacled girl staring at her from the table opposite them. The girl was deathly pale and her head was covered in an unruly mass of dirty blonde curls. Her name was Gwendolyn Gothrocks, but everyone called her Little Wendy due to an incident in freshman year where she'd lost her bikini top in the swimming pool during gym and briefly exposed her miniscule bust to the entire class.

    "Why don't you just take a fuckin' picture?" Katie roared. The lunchroom erupted with laughter. Little Wendy's head dropped and she began picking at her salad.

    "C'mon, baby, just be cool," Jamar said as he pulled Katie back into her seat.

    "Jay, that bitch ogles me like a piece of meat every fucking day!" Katie raved. "I caught her lookin' at my boobs in the shower after gym class yesterday...fucking lezzer. Oh, shit! Jay, baby, I didn't mean..."

    "Guess it just slipped your mind that Trishanna, my sister AND your friend, is a lesbian, huh?"

    "I'm sorry, baby. You know I say some wild shit when I get pissed off. I'll so totally make it up to you..." When she was certain that Little Wendy was looking at her again, Katie hopped into Jay's lap and ground her bum against his member. As she performed her impromptu lapdance, she glared at Little Wendy and silently mouthed "I like MEN, you fucking lesbo." The baleful, hate-filled grimace Little Wendy gave her in return made Katie shudder.

    "Hey, let me get one of those next, sis!" Kenny leaned across the table and stuffed a folded twenty dollar bill down the top of Katie's blouse.

    "You fucking horndog!" Katie shrieked, flinging a french fry at him.

    "I want a refund!" Kenny's hand shot out and made a half-hearted attempt to retrieve his money: his true goal was to squeeze one of Katie's boobs! "Honk! Honk!Worth every penny," he grinned.

    "I am so kicking your ass!" Katie lunged at her brother and was restrained once again by Jay.

    "Get your own woman, dude." Jay said. "This one's taken."

    "I'm perfectly willing to share," Ken chuckled whilst winking at Katie.

    "You're such a fuckin' perv!" Katie groaned.

    "You know you love me," Kenny sneered.

    Secretly, Katie enjoyed Kenny's incestuous overtures toward her, encouraging him by lounging about the house in her bra and panties and leaving the bathroom door open so he could accidentally walk in on her while she was on the toilet or in the shower. If the truth ever came out, she felt as if she'd die of shame.

    Just then, the teen trio felt a familiar tingle in the back of their heads: it was a telepathic message! Great, Katie thought. Another collect call from fantasy land.

    An image of a wizened old man with a flowing beard and long hair, both white, appeared in their minds. This was their mentor, the Hindi holy man known only as Thunstofam. "My children," he intoned regally, "your city is in danger from a legion of your greatest foes. You must go into action at once!"

    "Yes, sir!" the teens mentally replied. As one, they bolted from the lunchroom, Little Wendy's malevolent gaze dogging their steps.

    "Who d'ya think it is?" Katie asked breathlessly.

    "The usual suspects," Jay sighed.

    Kenny ticked off the list: "Madame Menace, The Maggot, Dr. Cerebellum, Krazy Kat, Lilly Lilac, Mechkanika, Thundro & Thundrana...Oy! I'd rather go to Trey's AP Calculus class than take on that crew!"

    Thundro and Thundrana were the black sheep of The Thunder Family--they drew their powers from the same magic words empowered Katie and the boys. Thundro went over to The Dark Side years ago, and he'd recently made Thundrana his apprentice. Katie was aching for another shot at Thundrana: the villainess had beaten the holy hell out of her the last time they'd met.

    The moment the trio entered the stairwell leading to the school's roof, Katie's stomach started to rumble. She'd eaten a super greasy cheeseburger with equally oily fries and a rich chocolate shake for lunch and it was beginning to disagree with her. Gradually, she developed a tummy ache that got more severe with every step she took. She soon began firing off short bursts of flatulence(she thanked god that the boys were ahead of her and couldn't smell her) that heralded a rapidly building number two. By the time she stepped onto the rooftop, Katie felt like she had the queen mother of all bowel movements knocking at her backdoor.

    "You ok, sis?" Kenny asked when he noticed Katie lagging behind them and rubbing her belly.

    "I'm good," she winced. "Just a few cramps, is all."

    "Oh, god, you ain't havin' your period again, are ya?"

    "WHAT?!? Ewww, NO!" she shrieked and elbowed her sibling in the gut. The sudden movement briefly made her lose control of her bowels; she broke into a cold sweat as a lipstick sized turd slid into her lacy panties! She quickly clenched her ass cheeks with all her might and hoped the boys didn't--

    "UGH!" Kenny grimaced. "Katie cut one!"

    "D-did not!" She was really starting to panic; the poo was surging against her bum hole with such force that it was only a matter of seconds before she lost control. She knew there was no way she could make it to the toilets in time.

    "Guys, quit dicking around!" Jamar snapped. "We need to get in the air!" He vaulted over the ledge and shouted "THUNSTOFAM!" In a flash of light and thunder, the lanky youth was changed into a muscle bound god in a skintight black spandex bodysuit with a gold thunderbolt on the chest. His arms were bare and there were huge golden bands around his wrists. His short, twisty braids had grown into long, ropey dreadlocks that went down his back and he had an Egyptian-style collar round his neck. Jamar, a.k.a. Thunder Man, hovered in the air and waited for his partners to transform.

    "Geronimo!" Kenny shouted and leapt off the building. He had to shout "THUNDER MAN!" to activate his Kid Thunder powers. Kenny's transformation wasn't as profound as Jay's: he remained a pretty boy with spikey blonde hair, although he got a bit taller. He wore a midnight blue bodysuit with a yellow thunderbolt on the chest; he also wore yellow gloves, trunks, boots, and cape. He started flying about, doing lood-de-loops in the air. "Quit draggin' your ass, Katie! Move it!" he shouted.

    "Keep your fuckin' panties on, Thunder Boy!"

    "Hey! I asked ya to call me Kid Thunder!"

    "You ok, KC?" Thunder Man asked.

    "Fine," Katie snarled. She cautiously made her way to the edge of the rooftop--each step she took deposited a walnut sized blob of poo in her knickers. "Fuckin' hell," she swore. "I bet this kinda thing never happens to Ladybug or Captain Cosmos! Wait, that's it!" She gingerly hoisted herself onto the ledge and was rewarded with a poo log the size of a Snickers bar in her undies. "FUCK!" she hissed. She quickly composed herself, gave her levitating lover a smile and a curtsey, and stepped over the edge.

    "THUNSTOFAM!" She cried out in mid-air.

    At once, the mystical lightning changed the petite brunette girl into a full figured, super-powered woman. As Thunder Woman, Katie wore a light blue latex leotard with a white thunderbolt over her prodigious bust(normally, she was a 36 B; in her transformed state, she was a 72DD). She also wore a cape and go-go boots, both white and made of latex. Thunder Woman squealed with delight: as she suspected, her superhuman sphincter was more than capable of containing her massive movement. She could'nt even feel the tremendous pressure in her bowels anymore! Therefore, she decided to hold in her poo until the end of the mission.

    "Let's go kick some ass!" she whooped as she flew past her men at supersonic speed. When they were well behind her, she quickly unfastened the bottom of her uniform and gingerly shook the poo from her panties (which were now bright yellow and made of latex). The guys quickly caught up to her;Thunder Man grabbed her hand and Kid Thunder playfully swatted her on the bottom. "You just love touching my ass, don't you?" Thunder Woman inquired.

    "It's so nice and round that I couldn't resist!" Kid Thunder replied with a devilish grin.

    "Focus, people!" Thunder Man said.

    It was then that Thunder Woman had a scandalous thought: she imagined fucking Thunder Man while Kid Thunder watched and beat off over her face...

    "Katie, look out!" Kid Thunder shouted. She snapped out of her reverie just in time to see a huge black oval appear in front of her.

    "What the FUCK?!?" She stopped in mid-air, but the intense gravitational pull of the shadowy object drew her toward it. The guys caught hold of her arms and tried to pull her away, but it was too strong for them. She bellowed in frustration as she was wrenched from their grasp and dragged into absolute darkness. It felt as if she'd jumped naked into a bathtub filled with icy water and sharp needles. The bitter coldness stabbed at her and took her breath away. After what felt like ages of floating in the pitch black void, she was blinded by the sudden reintroduction of light. She felt as though she was going to be seriously ill.

    "Sorry about that."

    Thunder Woman recognized the voice but she couldn't place it as she was still a bit groggy from her ordeal. The speaker was female and standing quite close to her, but Thunder Woman's eyes hadn't readjusted to the light enough to make her out. "Going through one of Osiris Black's teleportals for the first time is never pleasant," the woman continued. "Hell, it'd probably even make the Behemoth lose his lunch."

    "O..Oh...Osiris...?" Thunder Woman stammered.

    "Shhh...don't try to talk yet, sweetie," the woman said softly. "Osiris Black is basically a living shadow/black hole from a dimension called The Shadow Realm--you were just there. He's the teleporter for our group...what's that juvenile name the media calls us? The Meta-Mob? I prefer Future Masters of the World myself..."

    Realising that she had been captured, Thunder Woman struggled to return to full consciousness. As feeling slowly returned to her limbs, she quickly realised that she was bound! Her arms were raised above her head and bound at the wrist by large, gunmetal grey manacles. The oversized restraints were connected to chains attached to a large hook hanging from the roof. Her ankles were also bound by two cylindrical restraints embedded in the floor. They were spaced far apart, forcing her legs to spread. She tried to break free, but the restraints held firm. The hell? she thought angrily. As her vision rapidly refocused, she saw that she was being held in a warehouse filled with wooden crates. Her captor was in a darkened corner of her ersatz prison chatting excitedly with a pair of blazing red eyes that floated in the shadows. That must be Osiris Black, she thought.

    The woman whirled around as if she had heard what Thunder Woman was thinking. "Well, well,well," she grinned. "Look who"s back amongst the living. Thunder Woman couldn't believe her eyes when she saw the figure stepping out of the shadows--it was none other than Little Wendy!
    Last edited by Narada; February 22, 2012, 02:10 AM.

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    Super Series 1: Thunder Woman Bound

    "Since when do the Future Masters of the World employ teenaged girls?" Thunder Woman asked, trying to conceal her suprise.

    "You're honestly pretending not to know me?" Little Wendy said with a smirk. "I get it--gotta protect that secret identity, right? Too bad I already know who you really are, Katherine Elizabeth Carstairs!"

    "Who?"

    "Don't embarrass yourself, Katie. I've seen you change plenty of times. I also get faint mental impressions from you, so you can't lie to me."

    "You can read my mind?"

    "Kinda-sorta. When you have really strong thoughts, they just...jump out at me."

    "You're a telepath?"

    "Nope. I can only sense the thoughts of you and your little Thunder Family due to our connection."

    "What connection?"

    "You haven't figured it out yet?" Little Wendy asked incredulously. She removed her glasses and sat them on a nearby crate. Guess I'll just have to show you. What's that magic word you lot use? Shazam? Kimota? Oh, I know: THUNSTOFAM!!

    Thunder Woman watched in amazement as writhing tongues of electricity raced all over Little Wendy's body and transformed her into a buxom, statuesque beauty. "Holy shit!" she gasped. "Little Wendy? YOU'RE Thundrana??

    "Guilty as charged," Thundrana smiled. She has luscious platinum blonde locks done up in a retro 1940's hairdo. She wore a skintight one piece bikini made of dark red leather. There was a thunderbolt cut-out directly over her prodigious bosom, her ample clevage concealed by a golden mesh pattern. She also wore opera length gloves and thigh high boots made of the same material as her uniform. As the beautiful blonde came closer to her, snatches of a song she'd heard in an old commercial raced unbidden through Thunder Woman's mind:

    I've never seen you looking so lovely as you did tonight....The Lady in Red.....

    "Oh, thank you! That's so sweet!" Thundrana grinned. She tentatively reached out and stroked her captive's cheek.

    Thunder Woman jerked away from her touch and struggled against her restraints. Thunder Woman's heart began racing like a thoroughbred. The rivalry between the two women had always had a strong, sexual undercurrent to it. She had been incredibly attracted to Thundrana from the second they'd first met in combat; she usually channeled the desire she felt for the beautiful blonde into raw aggression. Her eyes remained fixed on Thundrana's 48 Double E bust as she sashayed closer: she trembled in anticipation as she wondered what her captor had in store for her.

    "You know, I would die happy if you looked at me that way when I'm Little Wendy," Thundrana said in a whispery little voice evocative of Marilyn Monroe.

    Damn...forgot her secret identity that quick, Thunder Woman thought.

    "I'm not surprized," Thundrana replied to her captive's thoughts as if spoken aloud. "Little Wendy's a very forgettable creature."

    "Did you just refer to yourself in the third person?" Thunder Woman smirked. She inhaled sharply as the blonde stroked her cheek.

    "You know, I have to punish you for how mean you've been to her--me. Just like last time. Remember the last fight we had? When I beat the holy hell outta you?"

    "Fuck yeah I remember that," Thunder Woman hissed. "I was still black 'n' blue when I turned back into Katie! God, now you got me talkin' about myself in the third person. Is that why you brought me here? You wanna finish what you started that day? Unchain me, then, bitch!"

    Thundrana merely laughed. "Do you remember what you did to Little Wendy at school the day I kicked your ass?"

    "I poured strawberry milk down her bra and called her a dirty dyke...omigod, that's why you were so brutal when we fought!"

    "And today, you called me a lesbo. I hate those words. Other gay girls use 'em, but I never do. Now I'm gonna make sure you never do, either!"

    "Whatever.I'm so gonna bust outta here and fuck you up!"

    "Unlikely. Those are anti-magic manacles--they neutralise the mystical energy that empowers you. I'd imagine you're no stronger than an average woman now..."

    Thunder Woman broke into a cold sweat. Without her superstrength, she felt the incredible pain in her bowels once again. If that weren't bad enough, her bladder was full as well! While she struggled to hold it all in, Thundrana suddenly grabbed hold of her and gave her a deep, probing kiss!

    "I've wanted to do that since the moment I first laid eyes on you...both of you," she said with a smile when she came up for air. "And I know you have feelings for me as well....I've gotten mental impressions from you that suggest you'd like us to get all naked and sweaty together!"

    Thunder Woman, upset by the unwelcome probing of her mind, spit into Thundrana's face. "FUCK YOU, YOU FUCKING DYKE!" she roared. "I'm nothing like you!"

    Thundrana's blue green eyes filled with pain. Osiris Black howled angrily and its shadowy form, full of angry red eyes and a row of sharp, gleaming teeth surged toward Thunder Woman. "STOP!" Thundrana ordered. "I'll handle this. You know, I was going to be nice to you, but it looks like I still have to teach you a lesson. Remember my Thunder Whip?" Instantly, a writhing strand of electricity appeared in her hand. She raised the whip and brought it down on Thunder Woman's bosom with all her might. Blood and scraps of blue fabric flew into the air.

    "AHHH! You fucking bitch!"

    "Again with the insults? Maybe if I raise the voltage on this thing, I can get you to shut up!" Thw whip grew larger and more intense in Thundrana's hand--when she struck again, the entire upper half of Thunder Woman's uniform was burnt to cinders. "You won't be needing this anymore," Thundrana said as she tore off the tatty remnants of Thunder Woman's costume, leaving her wearing only her latex knickers and boots. "Have you learnt your lesson, Katherine?"

    "FUCK YOU!" She replied, blinking back tears of pain. With a sigh, Thundrana flicked the whip between Thunder Woman's legs, catching her right on the clit. "Fuck!" At once, she began pissing uncontrollably. The release of her long pent up urine definitely felt erotic, and she closed her eyes and bit her bottom lip as the warm liquid poured from her.

    Thundrana slipped her hand into her captive's panties and stroked her piss hole until her wee trickled to a halt. "I do believe I am starting to tame you!" Thundrana panted. She then removed her piss sodden hand and licked it. "Delicious." She then started running a round the captive superheroine at lightspeed, lashing her over and over again with the electric whip.

    At some point during her beating, Thunder Woman's grunts of pain became groans of pleasure. When a particularly savage blow landed on her ass, she finally lost control of her bowels and a large, sausage -shaped turd erupted loudly from her tiny pink bumhole! "Ohhh...goddd..." she moaned as it fell into her panties and was quickly joined by another log of the same size. After another tinier log squeezed out of her, her aching anal opening spewed forth a thick gusher of sticky, smelly poo that filled her panties up to the waistband. There was so much that it began oozing out her legbands and running down her legs like a snake.

    "You naughty thing!" Thundrana shouted as she came to a stop behind the captive superheroine. "A big girl like you shitting on yourself--you ought to be ashamed!" She gave Thunder Woman a brutal lash on her bare back, and then another on her ass. Tiny sprays of poo shot out and showered both women. "BITCH! You got me all dirty!" She gave the bound woman several lashes.

    Thunder Woman arched her back with each electric blow, suprised that she was getting more and more aroused with every strike. "Let me down..." she moaned.

    "Why would I do that?"

    "Read my mind."

    Thundrana looked at her captive in amazement. "L-Liar!"

    "Try me."

    Thundrana tore the shackles from the woman's wrists and flung them to the ground, freeing her legs in the next second. The moment she was freed, Thunder Woman's full strength returned and she tackled Thundrana to the floor. As they playfully wrestled and kissed each other, Thunder Woman ripped off Thundrana's outfit, leaving her wearing only her gloves and boots.

    "God, you don't know how long I've wanted to do this!" she squealed.

    "Shut up!" Thunder Woman ordered. She mounted the prone body of the voluptuous blonde in the reverse cowgirl position(that is, with her back to her), thrusting her poop filled panties into her face.

    "You fucking STINK!" Thundrana giggled, slapping her on the ass. She then pulled the brunette's yellow panties aside and buried her tongue in her shit filled asshole.

    "Fuck!" Thunder Woman moaned. She took a few moments to drag her tongue down Thundrana's curly blonde thatch of pubic hair before she roughly wrenched apart the blonde's meaty pink cunt lips and gave her a light speed tongue bath.

    "Fuck...oh, FUCK!" Thundrana shouted. "Eat it...eat my fucking pussy!"

    Thunder Woman was suprised at how much she was getting turned on by having her face between another girl's legs. The musky odor and tangy sweet taste of Thundrana's cunt got her hotter than hell. She reached back and dipped her hand into her shitty knickers and fingered her own snatch at super-speed, giving herself multiple orgasms.

    Thundrana had also gotten off numerous times; the floor was growing slick with her vaginal secretions. "Katieee...." she whined. "Stop...y-you're g-gonna fuckin' kill me!"

    "I-I can't help it! Your pussy tastes so...fucking...GOOD!"

    "Oh jesus...you first time muff divers are so cute!" With that, Thundrana yanked down Thunder Woman's panties (dumping a great deal of poo all over her neck and humongous tits) and lapped her shit covered cunt at warp speed.

    When Thunder Woman came more times than she could count, she made the time-out gesture and whimpered "Stop Wendy...it's WAY too...intense!"

    "That's what I was trying to tell you!" Thundrana laughed. She took one last lick, gathering up a huge clump of poo in her mouth as she did so. She then pushed Thunder Woman onto her back and mounted her, gently grinding her cunt on the other girls. She then leaned over her and gave her a kiss, spitting the lump of poo between the brunette's lips. The two lovers laid on the floor passing the poo back and forth between them. When they were finally spent, they laid in each other's arms, Thundrana suckling one of Thunder Woman's enormous tits.

    "I'm sorry for the way I've been treating you--the Little Wendy version of you, that is," Thunder Woman sighed dreamily. "I only hated you so much because you remind me of myself, you know? I've had gay tendencies for some time now.When I poured that milk down your bra at school last week, I was really just lashing out at myself. You're just so out 'n' proud and I'm a total in the closet case..." She sighed. "So, is this how you get all your girlfriends? Tie 'em up and horse whip 'em?"

    "Wait...are you my girlfriend now?"

    Before Thunder Woman could reply, she put a hand to her forehead.

    "Telepathic message. It's Jamar! He an' my brother totally whupped your... associates and are on their way. Shit! I cheated on him! What the fuck am I gonna tell him?"

    "Don't tell him shit! Let's keep this our little secret...it's much dirtier that way! Osiris, let's go." Instantly, a pool of shadows formed under Thundrana and she slowly sank into it. "We should totally do this again sometime."

    "Definitely." Thunder Woman leaned over and kissed the breathtaking blonde one last time before she vanished. Thunder Man and Kid Thunder arrived seconds later and were shocked to see Thunder Woman wearing only boots and sagging panties overflowing with shit...


    Little Wendy didn't go to school for a few days after that; she was trying to lay low in case Katie told the guys about her secret identity. She usually spent her time pleasuring herself to the memory of that day with a dildo she'd liberated from her mom. One afternoon while she was thus engaged, she was startled by a knock at her bedroom window. Her heart practially jumped out of her body--it was Thunder Woman! Little Wendy didn't bother getting dressed: she was only wearing a pink bra with matching panties. She raised the window with a huge grin.

    "Hey, cutie!" Thunder Woman said as she stepped inside. She then spoke her magic words backwards "--MAFOTSNUHT--" and changed into her Katie Carstairs form. "Why ya been cuttin' class? You ain't avoidin' me, are you?"

    "You have atrocious grammar, Katie Carstairs." Little Wendy grinned. "You, ah, didn't..."

    "Tell the guys about your alter ego? Nope, your secret is safe with me."

    The two girls silently sat on Little Wendy's bed for a moment, quite a space apart. "I take it that these little 'mosquito bites' of mine don't compare to Thundrana's huge tits, do they? Little Wendy said with a sigh. "I'll get her for you. Thunsto-"

    Katie clapped her hand over the girl's mouth before she could finish. "You silly goose. I'm here to see you!"

    "M-me?"

    "Yes! If this thing between us is gonna last, I need to get to know both sides of you, not just the one I like. What do ya say, Gwendolyn?" Katie took the dildo Little Wendy was still holding and licked it seductively while patting the spot on the bed next to her. Little Wendy stripped off her bra and panties and jumped into Katie's lap.

    "Call me Wendy," she purred.

    The End(?)

    NEXT: Super Series 2: Mighty Morphin' Poopy Rangers!
    Last edited by Narada; March 22, 2012, 10:22 AM.

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    • #3
      Very well written.
      I generally prefer the more tame stuff, but I still read it entirely.

      I really look forward to reading the announced next part. The name sounds very funny.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Drying
        Very well written.
        I generally prefer the more tame stuff, but I still read it entirely.

        I really look forward to reading the announced next part. The name sounds very funny.
        Thanks. Nothing turns me off more than badly written porn filled with grammatical and spelling errors.
        I flippin' LOVE the dirty stuff, as I believe I told you before. The next part of the series is going to be thoroughly filthy as well...That probably won't be the actual title of the story, by the way. That was kind of a description of what to expect.

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        • #5
          Great story. I'm generally not a fan of stories that involve characters with a fantastic element, but this one was very well done. I should've know it would be good since you wrote it. I can't wait for the next part.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by TheSnacks
            Great story. I'm generally not a fan of stories that involve characters with a fantastic element, but this one was very well done. I should've know it would be good since you wrote it. I can't wait for the next part.
            Thanks, Snacks! I like writing stories of this type, mostly because I'm well into superheroes and fantasy. I have a story involving witches that I'll get around to posting someday, and a few science fiction tales as well--Starship Poopers, if you will.

            I'm working on the next part to the Super Series--a takeoff on the Power Rangers--and hope to have it up soon.

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            • #7
              Absolutely amazing once again Narada! Can't wait for the next installment. Think you can do something with diapers and messing in the next one? Loved the lesbian stuff with Shazam. I coulda sworn they say "Shazam" in order to be granted their powers. Huh. Guess I learned something new today. Once again, great job!

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              • #8
                As always, you've come through in epic fashion. Thanks for another great story. I'm looking forward to the next one.

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by diaperdude7
                  Absolutely amazing once again Narada! Can't wait for the next installment. Think you can do something with diapers and messing in the next one? Loved the lesbian stuff with Shazam. I coulda sworn they say "Shazam" in order to be granted their powers. Huh. Guess I learned something new today. Once again, great job!
                  Thanks for the kind words! Shazam(I think you mean Captain Marvel) wasn't in this story--my generic knock-off versions of him and his cohorts were. Didn't you read the introduction before the story? Captain Marvel and his lot do use the word Shazam to activate their powers--the heroes in my story use a different magic word.
                  Last edited by Narada; February 22, 2012, 01:30 AM.

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by progpoop
                    As always, you've come through in epic fashion. Thanks for another great story. I'm looking forward to the next one.
                    Thanks progpoop! The next installment is in the works.

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                    • #11
                      Great story, Narad! The Thunder Family are an interesting bunch--you put a lot of thought into them for a one-shot story! I would love to see more of them, especially Thunder Woman and Thundrana. I cannot wait to see your pseudo Power Rangers story--I love those guys!

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Scatman
                        Great story, Narad! The Thunder Family are an interesting bunch--you put a lot of thought into them for a one-shot story! I would love to see more of them, especially Thunder Woman and Thundrana. I cannot wait to see your pseudo Power Rangers story--I love those guys!
                        You didn't tell me how many loads you blew reading this like you usually do! This was supposed to be just a one-off story, but as I wrote it, I came up with loads of ideas for the Thunder Family--stuff that is non panty pooping/scat related and therefore beyond the scope of this site. As is the case with all of the characters I've created for The Super Series, I hope to eventually do an online comic with them, as well as featuring them at the storyboard I plan to open someday.

                        The "Power Rangers" story is in the works and I hope to post it soon.

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                        • #13
                          Made any progress on your Power Rangers story yet, Narada? Can't wait to read it!

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                          • #14
                            It's coming, scatman. Probably sometime next month.

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